Tag: tanka
group name: distantthunder
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July 26, 2007 08:39 PM EDT --
adagio
choosing to include these
long slow notes
in a poem about
loneliness
due to the radical difference in Japanese and english, an english language tanka (like an english haiku) contains . . . more
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August 12, 2007 09:31 PM EDT --
revision incorporating input from josh and Cindy.
barbwire lines
either side of this country road
barely contained
thoughts about a woman
I hardly even know
original . . . more
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July 25, 2007 11:03 PM EDT --
bakery girl
lets her fingers rest
in my palm
the warmth of my change
the scent of rising dough
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